All Comments on 'The Roadtrip'

Fantastic story...but "fell in the road", "their instead of "there," and "of cause" instead of "of course," just to name a few....get someone to read through the next one with you and you will get great reviews.

...learn to spell! A couch isn't a coach!

Well thought out and (apart from the spelling) was was very good, I know it is hard to reread something you have just put the finial full stop to , but you need to.