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by aussie_101

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asiaprofasiaprofover 16 years ago
Superbly written!

Super back and forth swings between inner and outer worlds

Interplay between the reactions of the body and the dyanmics of the relationship...

Great! Hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
clever

Two things.

First, you let us know that he's used to being in control. Second, you allow her to 'grow' personally in this story, and you allow the male to 'surrender' to her.

But the key to such writing is that you do all this while making us really like these two folks. Excellent work

And yes, it's am saying that to you! Good stuff man!

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