All Comments on 'The Seal Breaks'

A story after my own heart!

I'm a very mix-gendered male. I loved this!

An excellent story. I feel like this story had far more depth as you imagined it than the story you have written.

In other words, I felt like you could have written a lot more than you did, and that this fantasy world you developed has far more stories to be told.

A little confusing... A little messy. In a good way, though.

I feel like this story could easily have been much, *much* longer. When you're bouncing between characters you really need time to flesh them out so the reader can connect with them. This would honestly make for a very good novella.