All Comments on 'The Search'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Could Become a Good Series

Take this further. They start dating and he moves Mom in with him. He gets her cleaned up and keeps her well fucked and then tells her who he is. Things grow from there. And much more...AnHoa Rifleman

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good start

Lots of potential here, enjoyed the opening.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Needs a Editor....

Too many spelling errors or too fast typing... story COULD be better if that was taken care of.... met instead of MEET, MOAN instead of Mona...But lets see another chapter to see if it was just a quick mistake or not...

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