All Comments on 'The Search and The Discovery Ch. 03b'

Loved your story, but... it’s and their’s for its and theirs? I cannot understand how these can be confused. For me it is really irking, also, how you write about “labia lips”. Are you aware that this comes out as “lips lips”? Labium is lip, plural labia. A woman’s labia or lips are the greater, or outer, lips or labia, and the minor or inner labia or lips. I do not know where this all too common mistake comes from, but it is really irritating. Sorry.

Wow is all I can say. Wish you were still writing, would love a followup to this or more stories. Most personal, "real" series I have read on this site. I just wish I knew a bit more about their friendship before this started, it would have made this even stronger. A bit hard to believe this could happen over 2-3 days but I will suspend disbelief...