All Comments on 'The Seducer: Origins Ch. 03'

Between u and that other dude you are beating this storyline and characters to death

Thanks!!

now that he has took control over his mind ....let him totallly take all he can from every one around him...all women included...a great story and concept

sorry, even if that's your "labor of love."

The origins story could've been summed up in a paragraph in another story if done well. The character didn't have that much sense of mystery to pull an origins story out of it.

Perhaps try taking off following the aftermath of his second failure and see how he grows or changes from that experience. I think that would be a more interesting direction.

...liked this story though you had me fooled at the end! I thought he was going to discover that Allison had been cheating on him with the young guy all along. But that would have been inconsistent with the premises of the story, so your ending was more realistic.

I would like to see my Dr. Gayle square off against your James in a battle of manipulation, but it's probably best left as a concept as you move on to other things and I work off my indentured editorial servitude to CopperSkink for all the editing he did for me.

Austin_E,

You have touched a deep subject. Do not stop! Consider:

1. What is the true nature of love?

2. Can James teach this?

3. What happens when the Primal State is simply The Truth?

Anon

make anothr one where he gets back with allison

His first case being with his ex.

But I don't see any need for further stories. I think the plot has run its course.

Not sure why this story didn't get more traction. It's brilliant. Five stars. It needs to continue. We need to find out what happens after he encounters true love. You are truly gifted and this was put together so well.

I put this in the same class as DQS, Rehnquist, Ohio, and Frances Macomber. A must read for every literotica fan!

Still 1 as can't give less, total waste of lit. Fuck off with this shite ya dyke twat

Sorry I didn’t discover you when you were first writing these, but I care about the Seducer and his successes! I’d like to see him have another go with Jennifer—now that would be a challenge, but I think she still harbors feelings for him....

Just never good get any feeling for this one. Well written, but nothing grabbed me.

5 STARS!!! Give more of the seducer!!! Great origin to Mission impossible!!!