All Comments on 'The Seduction of Ada'

I thought you did a great job with the characters, I really liked both of them (and obviously his wife too). Although the outcome seems obvious, I hope you throw us a curve. I'm looking forward to Ch2.

A great tale with fine characterizing. Your writing is a cut above the usual standard dished out at LITEROTICA and I’m looking forward to Ch.2. Don’t keep us waiting too long!

Please don't keep us waiting very long for the next part of this very well written story.

I liked what you have done and it grabbed my emotions from the beginning.

Very well done!!!

Heartfelt, sensitive, literate and beautifully written. Chapter 2 of this series, which I will read, feels like a small, lovely gift waiting for me. My appreciation to the author.

I think your other readers said it all, but I have to add my two cents worth. On what was a relatively difficult subject, young pregnant women moving in with older couple, you did a wonderfully sensative heartwarming job of developing a beautiful story, or at least part one of what I hope will be a beautiful story. Congratulations. 60 year old George

I like the way it went -

For ir to go further is fine but it works as it ends here -

Them being a family can work - for him to marry her will be a stretch - 20 vs 60??

One star…for sighting Andrea Dworkin, a whack job who believes sex between married couples is rape,