by JakeRivers
One star…for sighting Andrea Dworkin, a whack job who believes sex between married couples is rape,
I like the way it went -
For ir to go further is fine but it works as it ends here -
Them being a family can work - for him to marry her will be a stretch - 20 vs 60??
I think your other readers said it all, but I have to add my two cents worth. On what was a relatively difficult subject, young pregnant women moving in with older couple, you did a wonderfully sensative heartwarming job of developing a beautiful story, or at least part one of what I hope will be a beautiful story. Congratulations. 60 year old George
Heartfelt, sensitive, literate and beautifully written. Chapter 2 of this series, which I will read, feels like a small, lovely gift waiting for me. My appreciation to the author.
I liked what you have done and it grabbed my emotions from the beginning.
Please don't keep us waiting very long for the next part of this very well written story.
A great tale with fine characterizing. Your writing is a cut above the usual standard dished out at LITEROTICA and I’m looking forward to Ch.2. Don’t keep us waiting too long!
I thought you did a great job with the characters, I really liked both of them (and obviously his wife too). Although the outcome seems obvious, I hope you throw us a curve. I'm looking forward to Ch2.