All Comments on 'The Seduction of Alex'

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Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114u3 months ago

Got My Attention

Although I’m not into reading stories with male on male interactions,the following chapters of this series didn’t really “grab me” so to speak,with the exception of the Dp,scene in the second part! That was freakin’ hot!

You are still a gifted author and keep writing these stories.

I enjoy this one immensely because it hit home to me. I have an older sister(5yrs apart) that I’ve been lusting over ever since we were growing up. And now we’re both in our late forties to early fifties. And single.

The rest of our siblings are married with children and in my recurring fantasies I’m trying to find a way to tell her my undying feelings for her.

Anyhow…….Loved this story and a big ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ from me.

Rwa4768Rwa4768over 4 years ago

Great story, I am so glad I read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing

This was great. Could use a little prove reading but was an amazing story of love, happiness, and erotica.

hottmalehottmaleabout 11 years ago
First time

First time I have read your writings. I am no expert but I loved the build up and the way you like to tease. Look forward to what is before me

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
thank you

Nice read, I'm glad you suggested it :)

C_frommnC_frommnabout 13 years ago
Bravo

A great story that led to a great Love.

I agree it needs more chapters to tell the whole story.

RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 14 years ago
Sexy

A good story that could use more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
good but

good but at the begining you said they were 18 yet already had kids several years old impossible they had to be atleast mid to late twenties keep track of what you write and make sure it is believable also the picture on your bio page is not very good looking you either need a better one or just remove it if you can't look any better

oldwayneoldwayneabout 16 years ago
Nice Tale!

I've enjoyed sibling incest tales for a long time and this one was especially good because you turned it into a love story as well. Thank you for your story.

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