All Comments on 'The Seduction of Elsie'

Wow..

just wow

Will Jarred and Sarinah mist into another time? Did Jarred turn her after biting her neck? Are there other vampires? Will their love withstand?

The not knowing is killing me softly.

Please continue with this story....

To bad you haven't written a second chapter

What did I just read, I was so 'fuvking' confused like OMG, it was wierd and I didn't even know if it was a Non-human or Interracial. But overall I guess it was good.

Very good

Really enjoyed this story nicely written

I love it, it was brilliantly written and like many other stories I've read on this site, I can visualize everything perfectly. Very well done

Amazing story. I believe in past lives, so this really appealed to me. Hope you write more again.

Great story!! I was hooked from start to finish! Please keep up the great work :)

The first story on Lit to make me cry. The passion between these two lovers was unreal. Loved it, keep writing.

Oh my god, what a great story. You really know how to make the reader feel all the emotions that the characters are feeling, the raw hunger and pleasure. Definitely keep writing!

I love it! I really really loveit! Your work is fantastic. You have hit close to my own fantasy that I would love to be able to watch it, not only to just read it!

It was amazing I could visualize the whole thing it was incredibly. *Applause*

It was amazing I could visualize the whole thing it was incredibly. *Applause*

That was one of the most sexiest vampire seductions that I have read in along time. The story telling is tight and flows well. A reader will be interested in this long after they finish the story.

This was an absolutely erotic love story! I loved it from beginning to end. Please continue to provide us with such great stories! Would love a sequel to this one!

Excellent story. Thanks for not using racial slurs. Your story is written with such a deeply intense, longing, passion. It was mindblowingly erotic!

Thank you for not relying on racial slurs, it made for a more beautifully written story!

I love IR Sci-fi, but it is hard to find on here! Great job!

I enjoyed this story very much! Thank you giving us an interracial vampire fiction. ;-)

Nice flow. I hope you post more!

Loved it. It was so sweet. A reminder of what I couldn't have. Bittersweet thanks.

I really liked the flow of the story and the dream sequences were well written. Can't wait to read more.

I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks.

I love this story. It was great I can't wait to read your next one.