All Comments on 'The Seduction of Louise Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Great!

Lovin' it!

I love your description of her breasts.

You can see them, feel the weight, taste them, everthing.

Keep it up.

eric shawn

scenttoscenttoalmost 20 years ago
Very nice read

You and I seem to think alike in our planning and ways to seduce a woman. I used the "dream" idea myself and it works brilliantly.

Also, you certainly took care of my little nit pic comment on chapt 1. I'm going to give you credit for intentionally describing her bust as "medium," because of the restrictive bra and baggy clothing you so aptly describe in chpt 2. Way to go. Now it's on to chpt 3 for me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Ah, memories!

Fantastic story.

Reminded me of a similar encounter that I had in my youth.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 4 years ago

Very hot! On to chapter three!

jkthekatjkthekatover 4 years ago
Just great!

I leave comments on everything I have time for, I'll make time for this series. just so visual! I can see guys pulling it out and squeezing gently while reading!!

Seriously -an exciting series- wish my band stories were as erotic.

jack

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderabout 4 years ago

Meets all my childhood fantasies of being courageous enough to chat somebody up so directly - and then have her turn around and not just accept my come-on but escalate it. And feeling a bit sheepish about the kind of moralistic excuse-making about how it is OK if it is only breasts..... Great illuminating story of youth and experience

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