All Comments on 'The Seduction of Louise Ch. 11'

We know the characters so well now, they don't have to actually have sex. Just talking about is enough. That's good writing!

esl

Enough already. A good writer knows when to end a story. You have not learned this.

Keep the story going. Don't listen to the eggheads that want it to stop. I have thoroughly enjoyed it.

Now this should have been the chapter labeled "non-sex". Still great writing, though. This chapter really fleshed out Louise's character. Very nice.

I really like the conversation about our sexual dreams and desires, and the reality that however much we know intellectually they are normal, almost everybody grows up with some shame about them. I certainly decided at least 40 years ago that there was nothing to be ashamed about masturbating, yet every now and then find some vestiges of that shame revisiting me.