All Comments on 'The Seduction of Mandi'

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redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

and did they stay together long?did mandi become a parlegal or go on for her j.d.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hot Story

You wrote a very good sexy story that flowed fast but still very good. This could use additional chapters where the judge gets Mandi to do all sorts of hot sexy things showing how submissive she is to the Judge. Lots of possibilities. Add more to this story.

ToweringFigureToweringFigureover 9 years ago
Definitely a new favourite

Great story. Great writing. Love the slow build up and flirting. hope there is another chapter where perhaps it might get a little naughtier now that Mandi knows her place

tied26tied26over 9 years ago
More please!!!!!

I do hope there's more to this story-if not I hope you continue to write stories in this fashion. This might be my new favorite pairing to watch for!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Marriage maybe for real?

I'm intrigued at marriage role play that Martha and Mandi can make permanent, and not just Mandi doing maid things. Perhaps maybe lead it into the real thing in future chapters?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Please can you make another chapter?

I want to see a wedding between Martha and Mandi.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

try reading the author hr6183 stories...same theme..great stories as you have here...I could have added Martha insists that Mandi wear spaghetti strapped nighties/sun dresses/tank tops (with bras straps showing as well) all the time for she has fetish for smooth young armpits and sexy legs in short shorts or short cheering skirts with lacy tiny thong underneath😋 and once in a while...Martha as punishment or test of loyalty...would share Mandis young body to older professional (doctors) butch lesbians some....with sadistic tendencies that unknown to her, would sometimes tie her up spread eagled with only her bras and panties and teased/examined by older butches and soon she would learn to like. just an idea of mine..again...great story! soulmate here

Randee1958Randee1958over 6 years ago
MORE😊

OH MAN YOUR STORYTELLING IS OFF THE CHARTS!!!

WITHOUT QUESTION!!!. 5🌟's.

Will add another chapter of this story??? Please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved the story. Hope you continue their relationship. Even Martha using a strapon that ejaculates to make them even more a couple and one day really get married and Martha impregnate Mandi for children.

kbone1kbone16 months ago

This is also a sexy and erotic story

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