All Comments on 'The Seduction of Penny Ch. 01'

by OrdinaryGirl

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Kanga40Kanga40about 18 years ago
Loving wives?

or a lesbian fantasy?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Makes Desperate Housewives...

...look like Last of the Summer Wine! More asap please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Good start..

More please, that was a good start I love reading about straight wives being seduced.. Dont make us wait too long..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
good start

can't wait to see part 2 sounds like it is gonna be a good one...great start

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
oh well...

I hope you intend to rock their smug little world!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
just encouragement

i've always admired writers of ANYTHING. i'm dropping this note to let you know that the ability to translate thoughts into prose (or poetry) is a real gift. And i sincerely believe that you have that gift. Thank you.

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
not a bad start

but you need to keep it going, just doing one chapter is leaving us up in the air

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