All Comments on 'The Seduction of Sylvia'

Loved it, my only slight query is that he's not really writing consistently in British English. See "check" instead of "cheque". Not enough to stop me enjoying an excellent story but it did interrupt my suspension of disbelief.

is this fantasy? or is it fantasy? lucky the woman who actually knows.

ls

I could only make that comment if I had read the whole story so no smart arse remarks.Much rather read the Bible thats full of all sorts of great adventures,but I do not suppose many who use this site regularly know what a Bible is.

As always, you’ve struck a chord in this reader. Congratulations on your “E”. ~smiles warmly~ It took a while in coming but as a close friend has taught me, patience…patience…and more patience. The right amount usually brings wonderful and richly deserving things. Of course, here on Literotica, those things are generally wonderful and rich, but also warm, sticky and wickedly delightful. <br>

KUDOS for an excellent story. I honestly wasn’t sure you could top your last one but you’ve proven me wrong. I, like Sylvia, wait with baited breath for your next delicious torment.

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Sincerely…kyrie1595

Your writing used to be simple, honest and arousing. Now it is pretentious, filled with needless adjectives and is calculated to extract praise from your reader. Stop getting carried away by the sweet words showered on you, and get back to honest writing.

Tantalizing

Made me really wish I was either female character in your story!

HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE TO GET SO GOOD AT MAKING PEOPLE BEG FOR MORE!?!

I enjoyed this story . Always nice to read and realize it is set in my home state of Idaho. *Smiles*