All Comments on 'The Seed of Onan'

Hot!

The strict, pious, religious theme, if well written, does it for me every time. Add in maturity and I'm in heaven.

You achieved all that - thanks. I'm off to check out your other works.

I guess if I were still 18 I might think this story was a real hoot. But as a grown man, I have to say it sucks. Talk about adolescent trash!

different personalities than usual story,nice change of pace

I love this story!

a sequel please. it has great potential. so why not continue........ i am sure everyone will love it

This is good writing and a good story. It's a far cry from the usual less imaginative stuff we see here.

The comment about this story being sophomoric is ridiculous. This is one of the more sophisticated stories we have on this site. Congratulations and I look forward to reading more from you.

Atkins

Despite what the last reviewer said. I think it was one of the better younger man odler woman stories I have read in sometime. I am so tired of the women being "10"s. I like that older women have their bulges and fat bottoms, heavy breast, etc. Write so more.

A good sexy story. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I've known several women ,as described in your story !!! They are so uptight,that it takes twice as much effort to bring them around but the results are beautiful ! One has a friend for life ,even if they marry !

Bloody good well written story. Not exceesively long so kept me glued to my seat.

Happy to read the sequal

There's nothing sexier than a Bible-thumping woman wanting your cum. Bravo!

Different from other stories . Give us more. Like to hear about the young man doing some mission work on his old neighbor’s seed vessel.