All Comments on 'The Sex Show'

Gross!

Very original and erotic. A few "he" mixed with "she" errors were the only things wrong that I spotted. The person who reviewed this as "gross" should avoid the BDSM area.

I'm sure a clever chap like you has more stories!

It belongs in the nonconsent section.

you should write more it was fantastic

more really soon

Luv to be in his spot!!!!

Epic stupidity. She sits on his face and threatens his breathing? He bites down and rips a piece off her ass. Screaming and bleeding badly, she jumped up and they had to call 911 before she bled to death. Same thing was true at the end. She sits on his face and she loses a piece of her vaginal lips. End to a really poorly thought out story. Laughably bad.

1 star