All Comments on 'The Shinobi Files Ch. 01'

Hey, I hope you enjoyed this story, I'm trying several new things this time, a female protagonist, a multi part story, and more surprises to come. Please let me know in the comments what you think, good or bad. I'm trying to become a better writer, and the best way to do that is to listen to my readers.

Thanks!

-Philharmonic

Interesting opening there. Very well done.