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All Comments on 'The Sight Pt. 01'

by dmullen79

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Potential..........

This opening posting shows potential for a very compelling story, but you're really going to have to get a good editor for it to be readable. And if the story is not easy to read, it will die.

-- KK in Texas

biercebierceover 11 years ago
very interesting

Good start.Neat premise. Please conitnue

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