All Comments on 'The Size Formula 4.3'

A hair over 15 inches long and 8 3/8 inches around in circumference…a long monster…but I still easily beat him…both way…he is not even close….I win.

You need an editor to clean up your grammar.it's a good story, and you are a good writer, but unless you reread your work, you need someone to edit for you. Well done. Keep writing.

XYZ

I do not understand 1.1, 2.2, 3.3, 4.3???? What is it with the numbering? A simple 1, 2, 3, 4.... would have been fine. Otherwise, I like the story precept. Please continue!

I really like this series, but I feels like it's moving just a tad bit fast. That's okay though. CONTINUE!!! Please.

At the end of #3, you offered thanks to Shelby. Unfortunately, he/she failed to correct your spelling & grammar mistakes.

You need a new proofreader & to enroll in your education system again.

part 5??

More Chapters!!

I liked the story would like to see it go further maybe two foot or longer

I'm really glad to see you've decided to continue with this story. PE has always been a favorite genre of mine, and I love reading about it.

I was hoping to read a bit about the bachelor auction. I thought that'd be a great story-line too. Rumors go around about him, bidding goes high, and the winner is in for a treat. Maybe even a small group of women get together in a single bid, and he serves them all.

Thank you for writing, and look forward to more.

i hope you continue!

I hope to read about the florida adventures!