All Comments on 'The Slave of Dystonia Ch. 03'

So incredibly excited for more! One of the best I've read, please don't stop!

Lovely descriptive writing. My hope is this stays in the same vein as TRS and TLT with a hissing snarling fighting heroine who has more balls than the Lord.

5 stars all the way.

This is a very interesting story, I really hope that you will keep the protagonist feisty and will not let the cruel lord break her spirit, or, even worse, make her accept being a slave, falling for the creep or some such nonsense. I can't wait to see her triumphant and free, and him subjugated!

I really like how this is going and you add a good amount of detail. I really hope you keep her defiant and strong willed! I hope there will be a new chapter soon!!!

This plot seems to have a lot of parallels to TRS.... however I honestly love that series so much that do I mind another story in the same vein? No. Lol, I really like where this is going keep it up

This is awesome! I somewhat disagree with other commenters here - on one hand, I like strong female characters who don't submit right away, but on the other hand this is the nonconsent /reluctance category and I'm not here because I like seeing women overpower men... You should write this story however you want obviously, but for what its worth I would definitely prefer to see her hopelessly broken and and under his control by the end of it all.

Happy to see that its up and running, although, i have to agree, if not copy anon, it is a lot like TRS, yet, it is not too surprising, given just how wonderful that series is, having some similar doesn't bother me one bit, either. Lol well put, Anon. I was hoping that Garrett was Lord Harper, or something like that. Maybe she could have fallen in love with him, before finding out who he really was. Either way, you are off to a great start, i do hope you continue on, and make this something all your own. Cant wait for the next chapters. Kisses

I'm so excited that you updated. This chapter is well written and I love the fight emil gives. Can't wait for more.

I love the story line so far. Im a little disappointed that nothing sexual has happened yet but the story is well written. I like how lord harpers character is unfolding. The fact that hes affectinate and intemidating are a great turn on to me. With how shaken the slave was that escaped i cant wait to see what he does to his slaves. I would love to see Garrett brought back, perhaps bought by lord Harper and used as punishment to make emilina behave? I think the story is great and cant wait for the next chapter. :)

So please tell me, what is TRS?

"The Rebellious Slave"

:)

Aghhhhh I can't wait till you read more! Definitely added to my list of stories to follow (along with "The Last Tritan," "The Taking of Lena," and"The Rebellious Slave," which is different, just a similar beginning, but frankly it's relatively common, it just depends on the authors writing skills. Yours, I must say, are Impressive!)

I meant I can't wait till you WRITE more, not READ more. Also, just to clarify, when I said it was common, I meant the idea of a slave auction with an imposing master. It really is the characterization and descriptions the author adds that makes it intriguing, and I must say you've done an excellent job. :)

Also, masterfuljim, I know TRS, but what's TLT?

Lol, you've said it

The Last Tritan

Mevanvy thank you so much. Just finished reading it. You are awesome :)

And Lord Harper already fascinates me! Please write more :).

I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER