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Click hereHyandai rose a few minutes later, and said. "I would go home now, my lover, if we may." She looked exhausted, her eyes had dark blotches under them, a thing he had never seen before. He put an arm around her waist, and helped her home, gently. She collapsed on the bed upon reaching it, and fell asleep before even removing her clothes. Harlen laid beside her and embraced her until sleep took him, as well.
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Anonymousover 17 years agoI've been a Huge fan of Terry Goodkind's sword of truth series, but was sourly dissappointed with each new book after his 3rd book. Ever since then i've been looking for an author that had the same passion and same talent that could "or' would surpass him. I think i found him! I'm asian, so i dont speak english very well. But I simply like to say that Your style of writing, and the characters that You created are awesome! Thanx!! Keep up the Good work!!!
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoWow. I never expected to cry reading here. Your writing is masterful. I've just started reading today, more chapters await, but wow. You've played my heart with a skill few can manage in writing. Burning anger, laughter, tears...
Wow.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoLike others of your readers I too was(in spirit) in that bar. The dirge which we felt inside ourselves,but could not hear,was very,very moving.It evoked memories of past griefs and joys and a sorrow for a life that ended so tragically young.
msboy8almost 19 years agoI felt the power of the dirge and got tears in my eyes. Bravo! It's hard to write emotion so well, great job!
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI enjoy your story very much and I look forward to each new chapter as it appears. Thank you.
