All Comments on 'The Solitary Arrow Ch. 16'

Love the H&H storyline it actually has plot and characters you get interested in and care about. Write more... now!

It is a but short on external interaction I would like to see them in more large group (not just sex) situations

Easily one of the best stories I have read on this website.

Can't wait to read more

I began reading your story whilst having lunch at work, and over the last couple of days have missed alot of work because of the series. I am well and truly hooked and can't wait for more chapters

While you write more chapters, I might check out some of your other submissions

I can not weight for the next chapter.

Love the story and the charcters. You have a very good way with filling out the people and the setting while keeping the story going. I like the adventure part better than the porn and would love to see a story written with the adventure as the main focus and the sex as just part of the story. I feel that right now you are trying too hard to include lots of sex and it is taking away from the flow. Please don't get me wrong I like the sex and think the idea of a fey of lust is great. I loved the sexy catwoman in your other series. This series could very well be made into a book but would need some editing. Keep up the good work!

Fallen Angel

The journey continues. And it's better than ever. Thanks for sharing.

these stories are absolutly brilliant loving the way that it is an actual story unlike other submissions just like to say keep up the excellent work

this being one of the first stories ive read on this site, I was really impressed with the depth of the plot and how the reader can come to enjoy and be engulfed by this story. KEEP WRITING PLZ