All Comments on 'The Spark Ch. 03'

Perfect opening for a real orgy between the two families

sandy, you had a great story line going, but you pushed too far. introducing helen could have been a great coup, but adding everyone else stretched the believability beyond the limits of the story. however, i do understand that sometimes we can vibrate our own libido even to the point of absurdity, and you have - too bad. adding another mother would have changed the human dynamics dramatically. unfortunately, you got a bit too wet, and in the throes of what i perceive must have been one hellacious 'gasm, you added the remainder of the family. the only thing missing was brutus, the family dog with his 9" schlong. next time, think things through.

Let the orgy begin!

Please don't make us wait too long for chapter4

this story seems familiar to me. have i read it from somewhere else?

Please tell us what happenend, i have a hot neighbor who i wish would come over and play.

GREAT STORY THE SPARK TAKING ON BOTH BOYS TOGETHER.

WHAT A VERY EROTIC STORY. SO EXCITING JUST HAD TO READ ALL THREE CHAPTERS. EXCELLENT STORY AND WRITING.

more more more!

That was 1 of the most erotic,taboo,mom/son,series on "Literotica"...You truely have a gift writing stories Sandylady...What would be great for a next chapter is if Donny's sister gets a taste herself...Hope you continue writing...a fan...

Please, you've got to have a chapter 4 to this hot story

great start wish you'd do a ch4

god i cant wait. plz tell me there's chapter 4

I don't know why you stopped but hope you come back and write more!

naughty but nice. 5 stars even if you mixed up the two boys in the last paragraph

Loved it. Verry horney and hot

Like others, please continue to develop this storyline. I loved it so much and enjoyed it so much if you know what I mean. Very sexy.