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Anonymousalmost 17 years agoawesome start
i enjoyed this installment albeit short, i do so hope you continue on and keep the story going. a lil more build up would be great.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoStrange but oddly erotic
Odd story. This could lead to a very nice series. Please continue.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoI love the premise
great great GREAT idea for a story! I hope you don't take too long in giving us part two (and maybe making it longer?)
Excellent work.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoLike
this story.It sure beats the robot films and stories that I have seen or read.Will you be giving us the blue prints for the robot(s).
gogreenover 12 years agoodd felt as if it wa only half finished
good story but it felt .. like an abrupt end...
may need more.
brillatn other wise 5 star
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