All Comments on 'The Stand-In Girlfriend Ch. 14-15'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
So Sweet!!!!!

That was a wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Perfect.

Just divine.

jazira55jazira55over 10 years ago
Beautiful

Perfection from beginning to end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
good ending

although it should be in the romance category

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Thankyou so much mspat

For a quick completed story.

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieover 10 years ago
Thank you!!

Mspat I loved this story and I wanted to thank you for completing the story. I am so glad that the evil Katrina didn't win and had to go back to States with her tail tucked between her legs.

roseloveroseloveover 10 years ago
awesome

more!! i want more!! lol great ending. are you going to update your other stories also.i hav fell in love with every single one and thats rear for me cuz there just one story thats always like WHAT. keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good Fun Read

Awesomely humorous. The parents made this story w/out them it wouldn't work. Not enough happening between Ashton & Chevonne. Their relationship could've been explored more. We didn't really get to experience them falling in love. One minute they hate each other, then we had the guilt & confusion and then all of the sudden they love each other. So ok that part could've used come work. But it was great fun & good chemistry w/all the characters. You could even do a spin off or two if you like because the supporting cast really worked. I too am glad you finished this one. That seems to be the readers only petpeeve w/Mspat. But she sure has fans and can count me as one. Thank you for a fun afternoon.

mrskelleymrskelleyover 10 years ago
Love it!!!!

I love it on sweetest taboo, and I love it here. Will you be writing more stories?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
MARTIN AND EVELYN?

what happened to martin and evelyn i would love to hear about them.

Lulu222Lulu222about 8 years ago
Another good one

This is another good story. Keep writing more I would love to read more.

Lulu222Lulu222about 8 years ago

Maybe a story with his brother & her friend

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
good read, loved this story.

Your story is truly one of the best that I have ever read on here. I could not stop laughing at the fact , Martin was taking the wrong advice on how to treat women, from a gay man, not that there's anything wrong with it but it's the wrong advice. Shaking my head, sad he lost out on the best thing that ever happened to him. Am happy for Aston&Cheyenne for realize how much they love each other and to Cheyenne for her forgiveness. An that bitch katrina she got exactly what her racist ass deserves.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Love it

I love this story! The details was amazing. I felt like I was apart of the story. 😍😍

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Surprised! Loved it

I opened this story hoping for something erotic to read and enjoy ;) but I what I found was a love story that is absolutely amazing! Publish this in an actual book, I’d buy it!!

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