All Comments on 'The Stand-In Guy'

It got very hurried at the end. Suddenly, kissing, dirty talk and being felt up? Either more flirting and physical affection at the club or more sex details. Both would help. Great story and good start.

Great job! Keep going!

That's exactly what I needed to hear!!! BTW, is there to much dialog? Input, people, input!

Just reading the author's note and I knew this was going to be a great story:

"For PTA East's hot orthopaedic surgeon and stand-in guy who inspired this story. I sincerely hope you never read this 'cause this might harder to explain than the time I fell in ICU and fractured my ribs."

I keep cracking up, and honestly, I'd LOVE to read something where the "inspiration" stumbles across his own erotic story.

I hope you write more and perhaps write longer, multi-page and/or multi-chapter stories.