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by Paris Waterman

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katibkatibalmost 13 years ago
Unbelievable

This is probably the best written story I've ever read on LIT; and the subject is interesting as well.

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantalmost 13 years ago
Lacks dramatic tension, and contains no surprises, but

... still a "5" This was a straightforward sort of story that seemed to involve ordinary people - well, it seems the husband wasn't all that ordinary, was he? And these ordinary people acted in believable ways.

By no means is this the best story I've read here - but certainly in the top decile

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
"So although her daughter was already on the island, we had to wait

until Her children were delighted that she had found me after all these years."

Did you leave something out?

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