by LuciousBi-Writes4U
seperate the disintegration...I thought was clever...of course sack finds faults with everything...so don't think you needed to change your literary creation for him <grin>
nice tale...and good luck Hun~
happy halloween
Sack already said it. I understand your reasoning though.
Good luck.
Black Tulip
hi,
from teh author...
yes, it does short change it a bit...but each chapter is worth a point a each in the survivor contest...so that's the price we pay! LOL ;)
thanks for baring with it! gotta get the most points for your words in this contest! LOL ;)
thanks for reading and commenting and your understanding of the strange posting process!
kisses,
LuciousBi-Writes4U
Why didn't you offer this as one longer submission? I think it might have read better and you would have avoided anyone feeling short-changed as each piece was read.