All Comments on 'The Summerton Home'

So hot I hope you continue the women's adventures

No build-up; no foreplay, just jumped in and 'did' it with very little description of how this felt, that felt, the next thing felt, and what was going through each one's mind at each step.

I agree with the comment about slam,bang. The preamble was really good but the rest was far too quick - the seduction almost led to mutual consensual rape.

But jumped from mild flirting to in each other's pants in two paragraphs. Considering they were strangers, the differences in ages, backgrounds, etc it would have been nicer if there had been some hesitation, maybe turning the single night's stay into a longer stay, dealing with the towns-people's reactions, dealing with their own attitudes.

But a good start.

They meet, fuck, fall in love and decide to be together forever in one evening?

That doesn't happen, even in the sappiest movies.

Try a dose of realism next time. Keep writing though. You'll get there.

This story is hot! Dont listen to those nay-sayers! We read different stories for different reasons. Sometimes we have quickies and sometimes we make slow passionate love all night. This story was sensual, sexual and just plain hot! Write some more.