All Comments on 'The Surrogate'

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GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 13 years ago
Hold on a second...

Page 1, James the therapist says, "Wouldn't it be wonderful to stop being a person and become a beautiful woman?"

Surely you didn't mean that the way it came out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
DSM-IV-TR

IV is the Roman numeral for 4 not 5.

TXanyTXanyover 13 years ago
Great!

What a well done story. Ignore the nitpickers...this story was enjoyable. I especially like the last paragraph - a nice wrapup even though you used warp speed through time to get there!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Interesting read

Very enjoyable story. It was intriguing to me how the therapist could be so intimate and encouraging to this woman who came in so doughy and unattractive. And how she responded to be more sure of herself, more sexy, more alive. Thanks.

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