All Comments on 'The Survivors Ch. 04'

I really like the whole series, it has the feel of a great

scifi book. I really would like to read more of this story.

The series is such a joy to read, can't wait until the next installment is released! Please keep up the good work : )

Keep it on!

THX

John

Budapest

This is an excellent series. Just to reiterate what others have said, your *story* merits a read on the power of the story itself. What a rare pleasure to find a true storyteller, what a rare gift. I am impressed. ;)

No sexual content needed or necessary to keep a reader's interest. Plot just keeps getting more and more interesting.

Vicki hesitated to kill the girl and it seems a good choice.

Back in chapter 3 Phillips killed the changeling girl when she asked for help and it saddened me. I couldn't have done it---kill someone asking for help. I was thinking Cindy would have gotten the same fate if Phillips had found her.

But it's a story that grabs your interest and attention!!

I think the reader needed to relax somewhat after the mayhem of chapter 3! In this installment, longer paragraphs might have made for a smoother read! Keep going!

Everything seems so quick; I've been tearing through these last few chapters. The events are nicely schemed up, but you need to add more detail to things. Somethings quite don't make sense, and others are too quick to really 'enjoy the moment'. Great work so far, but I'm hoping to see some improvement in the following chapters!