All Comments on 'The Sweetest Dessert'

A good story since we've all heard of the "dessert" dinners. Seducing a woman without ever touching her,,, now that's interesting. I'm lucky to get anywhere even with an overactive tongue.

Maybe I am wrong but I think more of the story of this beautiful woman should be told.

I've been wondering if the 'cum' would be direct deposit or ladled. And WHY would a man want that?? This reminds me of the old joke. She looked so good I didn't know whether to eat up the fucking or fuck up the eating.

Good writing pt.

I live in Portugal part of the year and can tell you their food is under rated and over looked. It is wonderful and I'm glad you choose that setting for Paul's encounter with Jane. Keep writing, you have talent and we want to hear more of this!

After a detailed seduction, the big reveal is the usual crap about men doing degrading things to women. Yawn.

enjoyed the build up.

Talked the whore into it.