All Comments on 'The Swimming Hole'

Would loved to have observed the threesome. Love having sex, but am a voyeur at heart. You do a wonderful job of writing, I'm able to visualise every movement and action you describe. Keep up the good work. I look forward to your next submission.

Being a man I usally don't like the girl only sex but your writting is so good and you make it seem so natural that I love this story.

Wow!

Great story about cooling off and warming up in the great outdoors!

Nice little scene but the writing is a bit rough. I do love a semicolon, but this is too much

She was raped and decided to join the two girls without permission. Sure it worked out but it makes no sense.