All Comments on 'The Swimming Hole'

She was raped and decided to join the two girls without permission. Sure it worked out but it makes no sense.

Nice little scene but the writing is a bit rough. I do love a semicolon, but this is too much

Great story about cooling off and warming up in the great outdoors!

Wow!

Being a man I usally don't like the girl only sex but your writting is so good and you make it seem so natural that I love this story.

Would loved to have observed the threesome. Love having sex, but am a voyeur at heart. You do a wonderful job of writing, I'm able to visualise every movement and action you describe. Keep up the good work. I look forward to your next submission.