All Comments on 'The Swimming Pool'

Unrestricted sex, in or out of a pool, gives a woman satisfaction!

Well Barbara this was my first real effort at writing something and it was just the way the story tended to flow in my mind .. I have more stories with the same two characters that I will be submitting. Thanks for reading and commenting though :)

I like an author who takes the time to set the stage. So many rush the story to get to the 'good parts', when the rush often destroyed the mood. It's refreshing to see a guy take the challenge and write from the female perspective. Keep writing.

Jake

Alright part 2?