by Just_John1
Just finished reading both chapters of this story and -- after turning the fan on high -- had to tell you how much I enjoyed them. The sex was stimulating, the feelings of the characters believable and insightful (special congratulations for your depiction of the female character's feelings -- I know how difficult it is to accurately portray the opposite sex) and the attention to little details (like her nibbling on his bottom lip being a secret signal of sorts) was a delight. Thanx for a wonderful read.
Excellent writing, the story flows as wonderfully as Beth.
Fantastic story. I loved both chapters. Have always been fascinated by the Sybian anyway. Wish my wife would try one. Great writing.
I have a strong Voyour streak and desire to please my lovers too; loved your focus on that, and wished I had simular relationship with my wife. Thank you for writing these chapters.
Good story. My only minor criticism is that Beth was his girlfriend in Chapter 1, but his wife in 2, the next day.
One of the best. The romanticism takes it to much a higher level. Great! Please write a chapter three!
Such an amazing and realistic story. The loss of inhibitions (even in a marriage) can be such a twisty, turning road. One of the best stories on this site.
Really well written, romantic yet adventurous and sexy. I love that you get both perspectives, and capture the feelings perfectly. One of the best I've read.
Wonderful my girlfriend and her b/f both completely lost control using the Symbian, the fucking that followed was mind bending. We all got totallyfucked up and blissed out, taking two days to recover. More and more of this please and soon. Fabulous writing. Cunt struck sex maniac Lanc's UK.
How practical could a Sybian be if it was raised off the floor ? I like the idea of rocking in the horses saddle, but a dismounting close to the floor is probably for the best. Anyone willing to admit to trying. How about holding on to your partner while riding, Ye Haw
Many more of this storyline, please. It could take many directions, but this is HOT!
A male reader, I read this while being e-stimmed by Jaige / Partie, a great file to accompany this wildly arousing story. It made me envious of the great orgasms that women have.
DAMN. That was amazing, awesome, erotic and mind blowing. This can only be non fiction but damn you certainly know how to tell a story. Would love to see you continue with this most erotic story. I am thoroughly enjoying how this is panning out and where it is going. Please continue with this story. Thanks.