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Lena felt her anger begin to slowly dissolve into heartbreak, and she knew that she needed to leave now. Her time with Renz was over.
She took a deep breath, and slowly wiped the tears away from her face with her free hand. She stared back at Renz with the strongest, most resigned expression she could summon.
"And you'll be nothing more than a rapist," she said.
Her arm was instantly released from his grip, and Lena turned away from him and left Schloss Wolfenbarger, without once looking back.
- COMMENTS
lilyflower23over 2 years agoNooooooo! I was already expecting a happy ending with my dark Herr Renz. 😟😟😔😔
Jasmijnover 2 years agoYes! She needs to find her own power. She needs to look in the mirror with pride, only then the relation could work.
SoftKtty24over 3 years agoNooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! That damn Gisele, her name should be Jezebel!!!!
Anonymousover 3 years agoThis is a powerful scene. I can feel the dread! Frustrated by the constant misunderstandings though.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoI’ve been sitting here all day reading this story! This is the best thing I’ve ever read on this site!!
Anonymousabout 7 years agoWas hoping to hold my comments until the end of the series, but this keeps my on the edge of my seat. You write brilliantly!
kdlucasabout 7 years agoI need to sleep so I can go to work tomorrow -- but I don't want to!! I want to read, read, read.
Anonymousover 7 years agoAmazing story, I wasn't expecting this twist but all the more gratifying to say the least. Superbly well done and now I'm wondering what happens next. Lol, you are great.
Merci,
Pongman
bound_venusover 9 years agoNovelist. Honestly the sex is greatly well written but there is so much more. I am fearful that I am nearing the end of this story. I am on edge. You, my dear, have written wonderfully. Nora Roberts or any of her peers would be proud.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoSo nice finding something on Literotica that not only has some incredibly hot scenes but a well written and engaging storyline. I've been thoroughly engrossed in this story...thanks for your great writing!
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoMany of the stories here are undeveloped and are just about the sex scenes, but your story actually has meat to it. I no longer read it for the sex scenes. I want to know more about the characters. I enjoy the character development (although I think Lena's character needs some more layers so the readers would actually root for her) and the interesting storyline. I feel like I'm watching a soap opera, and I can't wait to see the next episode. I want to know how the story ends with Renz and Lena, and have completely forgotten this is erotic literature. lol
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI salute you, anon below me. Great story, ablondegoddess. It's turning out to be a really good weekend read for me.
