All Comments on 'The Tales of Andrea & Dean Ch. 01'

by thewhitestripe

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bryand450bryand450almost 11 years ago
New stuff

Interesting new series, love to see where we go from here.

irvlynirvlynover 10 years ago
You are very good at this!

Literate, well thought-out and planned. Also very sexy: anticipation is the key and you do it well. Fact is, orgasms are relatively short, but foreplay can be agonizingly exquisite, and foreplay is anticipation. Keep writing, you're good at it.

jurasickjurasickalmost 9 years ago
That was so erotic!

Very well written. I always used to avoid stories tagged "Exhibitionist & Voyeur" as they didn't somehow appeal to me. But knowing your writing style, I decided to take a look. Boy was I wrong about this category! Very erotic indeed! Can't wait to read the rest of this series.

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