by thewhitestripe
Literate, well thought-out and planned. Also very sexy: anticipation is the key and you do it well. Fact is, orgasms are relatively short, but foreplay can be agonizingly exquisite, and foreplay is anticipation. Keep writing, you're good at it.
Very well written. I always used to avoid stories tagged "Exhibitionist & Voyeur" as they didn't somehow appeal to me. But knowing your writing style, I decided to take a look. Boy was I wrong about this category! Very erotic indeed! Can't wait to read the rest of this series.