All Comments on 'The Tales of Andrea & Dean Ch. 10'

This is one hot story.

This was quite an unexpected turn! I think the strength of this series is that its completley unpedictable. I loved how you got into Andrea's head and the interaction between Kelly and Andrea was actually my favorite part about the story even though it wasn't directly sexual. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Hey Whitestripe, I've been a big fan of your writing for a while but there's one thing that recently concerns me: some increasing mysogyny. I'm talking of the attitudes of male characters, language, forced gagging etc. across your story lines. Now I'm very much for not judging people on their preferred sexual flavours, especially those in fantasy but even as a male I don't like treatment (real or imagined) towards women which is humiliating, degrading, forceful or aggressive. In a wider context, such themes and attitudes contribute towards rape culture. But what IS sexy, in my opinion, is sexually liberated women, engaging in hot, crazy sex with male characters who are respectful. This seemed more evident in your earlier work. Anyways, take it or leave it but I humbly request you consider. And also a cross over story or stories would be cool! Cheers mate

To Anonymous above: Thank you for your feedback. I certainly take it to heart, and have absolutely no intention to express misogynist ideas, or to contribute to negative attitudes towards women (e.g., rape culture). I'd be more than happy to respond to your comment directly, if you would like to contact me via email.