All Comments on 'The Talons of a Dark Heart Ch. 08'

Thanks for another chapter. I enjoy your story. Keep writing!

You continuously amaze me in how your writing takes me on a journey and then leads me to another place. Please continue to write this is a beautiful developed story and I would wait a month or a year in order to read the next chapter..when are you going to publish? And will you write another? Raina nyc

I liked this chptr a lot.Ur work is getting better day after day.And finally i can say that the fog is lifting.So keep writing n post the next chptr ASAP.

go on .the time u took does not matter, u keep up the quality. but if possible , update a little earlier, readers are dying to know what happens to taylis

First off.... im glad you wrote another chapter it was great!!!

Secondly... YES THAT BITCH WILL DIE! hahaha. I have been waiting and wanting so badly that you got rid of that Calena. He should have and will be with Talyis! :) Now im all excited to hear about the next chapter. Plus, he still needs to find out that she is pregnant!

God, I wish Taylis' people were the one's seiging the place. I just want Novak to die. Dont care how. Just have him die.

Story continues to be quite interesting. Talyis still really haven’t come into her own. After such extreme torture, hard for reader to believe she’s now “in love” with a person who is so sadistic. No matter what Novak feels and thinks, it comes across as contrived and not authentic. Talyis possible pregnancy is kinda typical and still gives power to Novak. To call them “lovers” just isn’t appropriate, “sex/rape object” is more fitting. Something more has to be developed in the Novak character to illicit a more humane feeling. Even his years spent under Talyis father doesn’t quite speak to any severe punishments that would make him so sadistic toward Talyis and then call it “love.”

Great interesting story. I cant get enough. I love how it blends a lot of genres especially your take on interracial issues. Keep going!!! The story grows and develops beautifully each chapter. I wonder what will happen with this battle. Novak is a great anti-hero. Submit soon please. I hope you continue to write. BTW What does morning becomes talyis mean. I have an idea :D

Yes!!! I knew Calena was a witch! I love how you've dragged the story out although it's driving me crazy.