All Comments on 'The Taming of Mr. Parson'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Just like a woman's skirt

Long enough to cover the subject, short enough to keep things interesting.

A good short, cute read. Thanks.

rg27612rg27612about 9 years ago
believable

I really liked this one. Well developed characters. Well paced relationship. Good job.

Ending left avenues for another chapter.

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketabout 9 years ago
Great story

A few spelling errors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This was really nice. Loved reading it from the male perspective.

mrdata9770mrdata9770almost 3 years ago

This was a lovely story and I liked the chicky ending. I don't remember when this was posted but if your still out there writing, how about a sequel? You can write about how jealous and upset his ex gets, the pushback from Bree's parents, and maybe the reversing of his vasectomy. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Why did he not know what kind of woman she was before he married her? Why did he not work from home before the divorce if it was a possibility?

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