by britster
I've never seen a story presented from such an angle and really enjoyed the premise. The interest and exploration was wonderful and the action painted a pretty hot image. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
~lucky
Loved it would love to see more from it a second maybe even a third
This is a very nice and sexy story of a young woman's curiosity. But it seems like this is only the beginning. I'll have to check to see if you've written the next chapter. If you haven't, you should. You have an easy to read way of writing and no distracting bad habits. You should write more.
By the way, you are correct that anonymous vitriol is an example of cowardice.
A very original idea for an erotic story. I'm not a fan of stories that fall into the category of incest (this one is borderline) but I liked it in spite of myself
I just thought of something funny, I haven't ever seen a porn flick.
lynda_pussy_licker.
... in its premise, don't think I've ever read a story from this point of view.
Not really into the BDSM aspect of some people's sex lives, but to each their own.
I fully agree on two things, this story of exploration needs to be continued, and the "Anonymous Cowards". Seems to be far too many of them.