All Comments on 'The Telescope'

very well written. subtle. clearly she had seen him on a previous day doing his voyeuristic activities. think about it - over a period of time several inhabitants of the tower blocks opposite will have seen his telescope for what it was whilst he was pointing it at other flats and sideways from them. how to take this further? simply continue this in the same way or have her giving him more exotic shows, or he susses out where she is going out to, so he either speaks to her or stays on the sidelines initially. now that I would like to see, how he susses (A) her flat location / number and (B) her destination. hope to see more of this story. thanks so far.