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Anonymousabout 13 years agogreat job!
This was fun! Great fun. I can't offer any construcvtive critism because there was nothing that I could imagine needed improving...IT WAS FUN!!! It sortt of left me wanting more, but I can imagine the rest of ther story.
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Anonymousabout 13 years agoWould be improved by...
...having a prrofreader and editor. Don't spoil the ship for a ha'peenth o' tar.
Anonymousover 8 years agoCan I work for you?
The mix of dominance, power and softness has me craving more.
thewinesnotalmost 8 years agoAuthorSend me your resume!
If you want to work in a fun, fast paced, professional environment . . .oh who am I kidding?
maddictover 7 years agoOK, I will.?
Is there any one your not successful with ? Your temp might want to be your steady.
A very erotic tale, the one the table to.
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