All Comments on 'The Three Day Pass Ch. 01'

Being a soldier myself, I liked this story. I have been curious about being with another man as the bottom, but I am too uncomfortable to pursue the activity. I like this scenario where a person just helps out and they both get to enjoy one another.

Put a condom on your typewriter to make all of us safe from the disease of your writing which is an infection of putrid typing.

By committee you have been voted a finalist of todays VIX AWARD in honor of sexxy vixen the most inept writer on literotica. Wretched category of writers you belong to, the shit smelling sex typers.

Don't listen to that last self-important jackass. I think this is a wonderful start to an intriguing story. Kepp up the good work and I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Wonderful story-- That other reader doesn't know what he is talking about. Only one problem --- the name of the girl should have been something else. I am "A Joanne" and I can assure you I would not have treated you that way. Other than that keep the story coming... looking forward to lots more.

The Joanne (not the one in the story)

I always love checking out the controversial stories since a lot of mine make it on there too!

I have noticed that a lot of gay-bashers have been reading my gay stories and leaving stupid anonymous comments, so don't pay them too much mind.

It moved a little quickly, especially since Joseph was nervous, but you had a really amazing start. I would have loved to have read more about the actual seduction and the sex; he seemed to accept everything pretty quickly. But other than that, I thought it was realy good and I loved the back story and the amount of detail you put in, also the original idea.

*hugs*

Hey, really enjoying this story. I hope that there is a sequel. I'm going to check now. Keep writing, it's good stuff. :-)

this was a good start. I feel like the stories always jump right into the sex and there was a bit of a nice build up here. great job!