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Click hereKeri was large but she was also very agile and her brother had taught her well. She bared her fangs and waited for the attack. May pounced, but found only thin air as Keri had moved out of the way in a flash. The fight was vicious, but Keri was by far the superior fighter. Within ten minutes, she had May be the throat, her fangs buried deep, as she increased the pressure. "Do you yield?" she sent mentally. May twisted until she was belly up and exposed her throat even more. She was submitting to her. Keri backed away slowly and waited for any other challengers. There were none.
Marshall looked on. He was filled with pride. She truly was his match in every way. The pack cheered and congratulated their Alpha on his choice of mate. They were all thrilled that they had an Alpha bitch who could protect them. Marshall strode to her side and wrapped his arms around her giving her a passionate kiss, with the pack howling their approval. He took her by the hand and led her to the den.
"Welcome home, my love."
I for one have loved all your stories! I read them all in one night! I would love to read more if you ever decide to write and add to this site again! And I surly hope you didn't stop writing because of an anonymous nobody! That can't even take the time to join a free site and come up with a name! You have good scores on your stories...so you do know how to write! Please write more <3
Nicky
I hope there will be more chapters as you explore the packs all coming together and being friends. I would love to see where this could go.
I am wondering what happened to the bit I wrote thanking my editor for all her fantastic work and Lostchicken and Jazcullen for their encouragement.
THANK YOU TO MY EDITOR EVIANT, and Lostchicken and Jazcullen for their help.
let this be the beginning to another great story. continue writing this story it will be a great.
This was a great story, I want more! You have done well in making your characters come alive, build a sense of depth and entertain us :)
Each story you post gets better and better! This is a fantastic example of your potential and your power and I look forward to seeing more.
I do hope this a a beginning of a good story...nice read, lots of places to go with this, so many lives to look into, and the forming of communication links could get real political...lots of twists and turns me thinks.