All Comments on 'The Ticket Ch. 01'

A lovely short story, with a fine dramatic twist at the end, and an interesting setup for a follow on story (or stories). I'd love to hear what happens to the husband, and if she ever sees the cop again.

Please, keep writing!

Richard_f

Spell check after you finish --- writing, that is. Mistakes detract from the story

I was so turned on... but the end turned me off. It was really good until the end. But that is a matter of taste. Some typos... they can be fix.

The story was good all round, interesting the way, at first the officer, got his way with her, but in the end, how she gets her way with him.

cannot wait to read what happens to the husband . . . was rather wet by the end

Just met you in chat I am impressed with your work It is very hot

One of the most.overused scenarios in LW. Just as silly as the others.

Not bad, but would have been hotter if she had remained a victim doing what she had to do to save her husband.