All Comments on 'The Ticklish Travels of Rachel Cook Ch. 03'

If this is the beginning to a story, then I can't wait to read the rest and I would have rated it much higher.

But, I suspect it's an entire story and in that case, it is lacking something. It reads like a terrific build-up for an excellent erotic story, but not quite like a story itself.

This story is an excellent beginning, but that is all it is, a beginning. After great build up, the writer leaves the reader hanging in expectation that is not fulfilled. Given the quality of some of the other stories, I was very disappointed with this one. If the author would go back and finish this story in detail, then I know many would greatly appreciate it and this story would get a much better rating. I sure hope it will be continued through the lab scene and completed properly.