All Comments on 'The Tie on the Door'

I was close to being Josh in college with what I thought was a decent girl then she did that type of thing to me. She paid the price, she was from the same small town and the video went big, plus the pinholes in the condoms set her and fucking idiot #4 up real well. I wouldn't take the humiliation or idiots or her so called friends tormenting me. She got to leave without her degree, get married to a loser and divorced within 5 years. Me, married to the same great gal for over 10 years now and I send that bitch a "Thank You" card every Christmas. LOL

... the author and "favoriting" readers ought to acknowledge that the taking pictures surreptitiously of someone else's sexual activity is a felony in every state in the Union - because it is

Otherwise, the story - piece, because there was no dramatic tension which the ending concluded - was so completely unlikely that IMHO it had no erotic value at all, and that is how I graded it

This is an excellent story. Well written, very emotional. Unfortunately its score is probably the result of it being so effective; it's making people upset and they are taking it out on the stars.

Great story, I loved it, and would love to see a sequel!

And to the person who made the comment about the camera being a felony in every state:

A: Who cares? It's a story.

B: That's not true, in some states it would be a misdemeanor, or no crime at all given that it was in his home (yes a dorm counts, it's your rented residence, and you are the lessee). The expectation of privacy is not the standard everywhere.

I have to agree with the comment that people are probably rating this story low only due to its realism and the fact that it possibly hits to close to home for them (or did in their past lives).

I for one thought it was well written and would love to see another installment.

I rated your story 5 because it was a good piece, I was merely disappointed that the nice guy got shafted in the story, particularly by his girl. A sequel where Pratt makes out in the end would be nice, but it is not a demand nor do I expect it to happen. You do good work, sorry this story didnt just quite hit the spots I wanted it to.

Very hot story! Really enjoyed it, just wished it was longer and more detailed towards the end... and more parts hehe.

The low score is because we're reading a story where the guy who gets the girl is specifically a character we're set up to hate. There's nothing sexy about that, unless you get off on humiliation fantasies.

> There's nothing sexy about that, unless you get off on humiliation fantasies.

Well yeah...that's what this is. Some people do like that. I do. :) This story is supposed to make you feel jealous, which can be a turn-on.

The low-ish score points out one of the limitations of the rating system. I suspect what's happening is that there are wildly divergent opinions: say, half 1s and half 5s. Literotica rates a story like that with a 3, just the same as a story that received only 3s. It would be nice if the distribution of ratings were displayed, like they do on the iTunes Store.

For those who've given the story good feedback, privately and publicly, I appreciate it!

Tremendous story! Gets you thinking about those opportunities which I guess we all had at college or university that we let slip thru our fingers and that someone else 'benefited' from. One of the very few stories I have read several times - really enjoyed the style

I want to see where this goes.

Hoefully, there will be more.

Enjoyed it! Hope to hear more to this story!

-Sophia

Not sure I liked the people described in this , but thats what comes with age and experience I suppose .

Why would I rate this story anything more than the worst score? There's nothing of value here. A author's craft is worthless if his content is worthless.